Writing

Once upon a time … there was a girl called Mindy she had blonde hair, blue eyes
but even though she looked nice she lived in a creepy house. She was 20 years old.
Her last name was Miller people call her Miller the Crazy girl. People thought she was
crazy because she would always go into caves and tunnels especially the darkest ones
and the creepiest.

Once upon a time …there was a girl called Mindy, she had blonde hair and blue eyes, even though she looked nice she was really creepy. She was  22 years old, and lived in a  gigantic creepy house. She adored dogs but she didn't like puppys, she liked dogs that were Vicious and scary. Her last name was Miller, people call her MIller the Crazy girl. People thought she was crazy because she would always go into caves and tunnels, especially the darkest and the creepiest one’s.